Good effort this week Ash-top one has vague silhouette & those elbows could've done with clarification to bring them forward.Strong fore-shortening on 2Good proportions but looks like she's about to keel over4-tiny head!5 lazy, cartoonified drawing6 -meh!7-nice! bold pen marks but anatomy in the back is muddled8 v. strong line of action in the spine-good one9-a disaster!10- including the 2 models gives a good sense of depth 11-good low angle- can feel a solid pelvis in there- well defined shoulder blades. Hair is well handled.
Dude!Lovin the first 2!(agree about the elbow on 1 - sweet line on 2 though!)
@Matt - Cheers for the crit! All very true. New batch should be up soon...@Rossi - Hey man, haven't heard from you in a while. You working in London now?